Hi Peter,  good on you doing ...

Hi Peter,  good on you doing this - it looks like a good coverage.  I may suggest two other topics that should be covered:-  dealing with algae (and hence the option of dissolved air flotation as a clarification process) - this avoids the release of algal toxins through pre-oxidation to kill the algae so they will settle.  The second topic is water stabilisation (actually quite a big topic).  Maybe I missed it in your outline though.